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Infinity's End

 

 

A frost has come, descending on the rose
and all the tears from friendly loving eyes
Cannot stop autumn’s coming, I suppose.
Burdening hearts unwilling for goodbyes.

The summer in a moment came and went.
The garden was so bright and beautiful.
A fabulous and delicate fresh scent
Of pretty blossoms bright and colorful.

Yet everything’s abiding by a plan
And change embraced’s poetically divine.
An ode sung long since time’s circle began
Is limiting the scope of yours and mine.

So beautiful this rose which shared with me
The mystical taste of infinity.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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The circles close before we are ready, unless we are always ready. Goodbye.

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  • Purrsanthema
    February 18

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    Your first line is magnificent! Do you need a period at the end of it? or will a comma do? It's lovely!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    So beautiful... tinged with sadness. I adore this write and will bookmark it!


  • myrataal silver member
    October 20, 2008

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    Inspiring ...

    Never a goodbye can end
    the time in mortal time was spend,
    for every word and every wish
    are shadows of Eternal Kiss.

    Let we in time then understand
    the timelessness of Ever-end,
    and take each day, being blue or bliss,
    as lessons learned, from Higher Hand.




    Love
    Always Myra


  • Cannonsfire
    October 19, 2008

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    Sometimes I think we are always ready we just don't have the strength to make the choice. Thank you for a lovely piece. Love, C

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