Thirsty

I'm so thirsty,
there's no water...

A contest entry

Picture Prompt by crivanea. 300 points, ended October 29, 2008, 38 entries
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crivanea
October 29, 2008

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lol..welll..if that's not the understatement of the century..lol...wonder why it was there in teh first place..hahah

The Fun House
October 27, 2008

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Wow, So few words. Yet it says so much along with the image.
You can really imagine those thoughts going through the animal’s head as he stands there.
Well done and good luck in the contest.

Pfeffster
October 21, 2008
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DEEP! This motivated me to get water

Sky Prince Ireland
October 20, 2008
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Good job. I think this says it all about the picture.
Thanks for sharing.
Brian

IrishGypsyRose
October 19, 2008

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How Cute...
Wonderful take on the prompt for such a young man. You did a brilliant job. Keep writing, you only get better. gypsy

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