And I have lost
the life between moments -
imagining breath as a monolith
Author notes
Prompt::
Come With Me by belle a dawna @ deviantart
A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture XIV by Manda Kathryn.
400 points, ended November 1, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honesty would be lovely
Comments
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very short but very well writen indeed who no 13 words could say so much i'm sorry to hear you did not win a tropy because to me this was a winner
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Very thought provoking in its brevity. I enjoy writes that convey powerful emotion and ideas within a few lines. Well done!
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I confess I had to look up 'monolith'
Powerfully penned in just a few words!
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Thank You for Your Entry
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Why are you so good? -Whines- You make us mediocre people look bad.
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Well when you see a mediocre person, be sure to let me know
because you and your talent should shut up
Beats mine hands down any day.
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Lies!
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Wow... I want to take your talent to dinner...
T.G.I'S perhaps?
This is amazing. As usual.
<3
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Keeps you wishing there was more. Great job.
Chloe
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*Worships your pen*
I loves it.
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ooohhh, superb
arent you glad i shared? lol
good luck and take care
Stephanie ♥ -
You write brevity with passion and oomph, I doubt anything in this contest will outdo this to gold. It left the reader on edge for their own conclusions. Best to you in the contest
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tons better!
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