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Ramadan the Holy Month

RAMADAN THE HOLY MONTH
MONTH OF THE BIRTH OF QUR'AN
RAMADAN THE NINTH MONTH
OF THE ISLAMIC CALENDER.

RAMADAN THE HOLY MONTH
TIME FOR SPIRITUAL DISCIPLINE
TIME OF  SELF PURIFICATION
THROUGH PRAYER AND SELF SACRIFICE

RAMADAN THE HOLY MONTH
TIME TO MEND RELATIONSHIPS,
GIVE CHARITY, FIND FORGIVENESS
AND REFOCUS ON WORSHIPPING GOD.


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  • NooNiThEWitcH
    October 20, 2008
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    Very Nice!
    Short and simple and very nicely written.. I did not feel any emotions in it but i guess because you mainly gave your reader information about the Holy Month of Ramadan.. (or I am just affected by Theoretical and Practical Criticism classes)

    Thank you so much for sharing and entering this in my contest. Keep on writing,

    Nada

  • hadiza
    October 19, 2008
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    RAMADAN A MONTH FOR ALL