My Birthday

today is big
cake and ice cream, presents too
it is my birthday

My first Haiku, My mom helped, what do you think?

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SmokinHotWhiteTiger
October 22, 2008
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Happy Birthday
by the time you recieve this comment you're birthday will have ende dbut I enjoyed your poem here. I do hope like everyone esle said that you enjoyed your birtjhday and got everyhting yaw anted any ways such a great write and always be glad mom was there to help ya out

Sky Prince Ireland
October 20, 2008
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I like this. I hope your birthday was fun.
Nice job.
Brian

IrishGypsyRose
October 19, 2008

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Happy Birthday
Great birthday Haiku!!!! I loved it and it is so cute. You did a wonderful job explaining the excitement of the big day. gypsy

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