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Rapists

rapists are the theifs of the night
lurking in shadows and behind corners
down dark alleys waiting to pounce
finally they attack with all their might
using brutal force and their weight
destroying the person beneath them
breaking them mentally and physicually
all for their own pleasure
they destroy the persons life
they wake up having nightmares
cant get them out of their head
turn them suicidal wishing themselves dead
and the unlucky ones who get pregnant
now they have to spend the rest of their life with that child
all from one dark night

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  • spideracer gold member
    October 19, 2008

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    True emotions

    Emotional darkness of the sickest kind, well written and one could say it shows the darker side of human nature. Thanks for sharing.

  • Forgotten
    October 19, 2008

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    Great write...Had me in tears...So much emotion channelled: sadness, worthlessness...i really hope that this didn't happen to you... keep your head up and keep up the good work

    Beck


  • Painwarlock
    October 19, 2008
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    a very sick and twisted poem that some would fin disturbingly true nice work