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Abysmal Eyes

     Stuffed deep inside the sweetest light is darkness of a kind
     That only can be caused by an obsessed despairing mind.
     A dark and chilling void of a gigantic scope and size
     Which sees the bedlam of the world through pain’s abysmal eyes.

     I stood and faced this tragedy with open arms and yet
     A good arms length away was just as close as I could get.
     Two small eyes fixed upon me filled with dread anxiety,
     A terrified and starving child that drained my energy.

     The Goddess waved her finger so I shut the window tight,
     Visualized protection for myself of golden light.
     I swallowed then the laughing eye, inhaled it to my toe
     Then gently told abysmal eyes that it was time to go.

     Inside my mind I saw a most illuminating sight,
     The darkness of abysmal eyes was drawn into a light.
     The anger and the pain dissolved and love remembered full.
     Now deep inside the sweetest light shines something beautiful.

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt: The Abyss Has Eyes

This is a poem that Tory should understand.

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  • echo-ink
    October 25, 2008

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    Beautiful, heart-wrenching, could be for a million of us on this lowly planet.
    This spoke volumes to me, as I'm sure it did to many.

    One of your most insighful poems ever.

    I adored it.
    Bell


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    And I'm sure Tory will understand this. Deep and full of meaning which I think I grasp some of


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 21, 2008
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    The Abyss Has Eyes



    Best of luck

    Passions