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Blissful Gift, Your Gaze

Your eyes.

Your eyes are so peaceful.

Beneath eyelids,

they rest so peacefully.

I gaze upon your face,

the heavenly outlines of your face.

There has never been a lovelier site than this,

my love asleep.

 

But, how I do love to look upon your eyes awakened.

Such beautiful emeralds.

Green waters of the ocean, they are.

So captivating.

 

And when the sun shines his light upon those waters I see,

emeralds are revealed.

Sparkling like diamonds,

or beads of water on flower petals.

 

Your eyes.

Those emeralds of yours,

are mine to look upon.

 

                Heaven save me!

                Beloved emeralds are awake!

 

 

 

For my love, my Wonderboy.

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  • Flowergirl
    December 10, 2008
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    wow very nice i loved it keep up the great work.


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    October 23, 2008

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    Whether a parent’s dedication
    Or a rapt lover’s meditation;
    This verse is wholly sublime.


    mj.