pistol
left smoking
in shaking hands
only permanent escape
from abusers evil clutches
Author notes
13 words inspired by the contest picture
Picture Credit: http://belle-a-dawna.deviantart.com/art/Come-With-Me-101116451
A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture XIV by Manda Kathryn.
400 points, ended November 1, 2008, 32 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love the dark twist in this; some feel they have no choice but to kill to escape abuse ... powerfully penned!
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Thank You for Your Entry
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wow.... and what powerful 13 words. so dark... and well written, esp with that picture prompt.
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yay for pistols. this was spiffy.lovely take on the prompt and good luck. Stephanie ♥
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Oh my
This is very sasd and dark, but I know this happens. What does it say about our society!
Brilliant, as always!
All the best in the contest
Gaylene
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