This body is too much fragile
To carry this soul even for a while
Which always wanders above the sky
And knows no more but to fly
And this mind ,this skull can't bear
It's high thoughts give me fear
It asks more than can be done
Wants me to shine more than the Sun
Oh this heart can't beat in there
Full of youth, love and care
These strange emotions not for here
It's so unfair, Oh it's not fair
And these eyes not for this face
They give this ugly face some grace
Deep as blackness, Bright as light
Only has height in its sight
And believe me or not
This tongue is a lot
It makes strangest sounds
It makes myself wound
I feel myself wrapped
In my body I feel trapped
My self is not at all for me
I wonder how can it be
It's too painfully strong
Restless, I can't bear it long
Comments
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hey sister how these thoughts com to ur mind.u r a fantastic poetess.the rhyming is just superb.i love dat.
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Wow, this was really well written. Especially considering the aa, rhyme scheme you used here. Very, very well written. You continued the rhymes to the end without losing flow or meaning. Great job, I really enjoyed this one. It was easy to relate to as well, for I was entertaining very similar thoughts only moments ago. Great job.
Tal.
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