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Patchwork Heart

Would you take my heart?
Mend the wounds
Heal the scars?

Would you take my eyes?
Love them though
Desensitized?

Would you dry my tears?
Ask me why
I'm full of fear?

Or would you throw me to the wall
Break me open
Watch me fall
Like everyone before has done
Crushed my dreams
For selfish fun

And would you love me in the morning
When I slit your throat without mourning
Cut open into your chest
And put that beating heart to rest

Would you love me still?
While I hide away
My ability to feel?

As I shed first tears
For the only thing
To hold me near


    Would you love me still?

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"You still sound like you. Try not to sound like you."

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  • warrior-eagle
    November 7, 2008
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    Yes,I would. I believe it is well deserved,and yes I honestly would. You know so. Does that answer your questions?