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Hecate

Missing image

breaking roots
she cried crucifixion

to the sky



bury me in your shadows

Author notes

Prompt::
Come With Me by belle a dawna @ deviantart

A contest entry

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  • Joseph Hollis
    November 22, 2008

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    A well deserved silver. This was an excellent take on the photo prompt. Capturing a moment with such limitations requires careful word choice. This one is a gem.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    November 1, 2008
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    wow...bravissimo, i knew youd win


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 1, 2008

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    I was enchanted by the final line in this; and the use of the word crucifixion

  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 1, 2008
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    Thank You for Your Entry


  • LucyLightning
    October 29, 2008

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    Wow.

    You have this talent of describing setting with such few words, it's amazing.


  • February Moon gold member
    October 25, 2008

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    I luffs this. Your poetry is addicting.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    October 19, 2008

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    i used sky.lol

    but this is like wickedly awesome. glad you entered, and good luck
    Stephanie ♥


  • Never Fall in Love
    October 19, 2008

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    I'd ot post the picture with it .. or post it underneath .. because it feels like you've only put the visual images in words - when Ikow for a fact yu must havedone much more.

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