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autumning the sunset

All the fall colours
remind me of old people
autumning  sunset

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  • azure85 gold member
    October 28, 2008

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    All the fall colours
    remind me of old people
    autumning sunset

    Very nice haiku, and it a good comparison set within the beauty of a haiku. Thank you so much.