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Thank you!

I've always felt alone
like i was always on my own.
I waited and waited.
yet i still felt hated.
Then Lord you came along
you gave me a wonderful song.

You took my hand.
Even carried me through the sand.
You've had a hold of my heart.
Not even giving me a chance to part.
Lord you made me anew and
for that i want to thank you!

When i fall back and stray away
you tug at my heart telling me to stay
You saved me and
now  i am free!
Lord for this i thank you with my heart
and i pray that you will keep me from ever
trying to part.

I thank you for that song!
I will sing it all day long.
For others to hear and know
they have nothing to fear.
Lord you saved me and
now i am free to sing
while i fly with angels wings!

For everything you've done i thank you
and love you for it to!
















Author notes

The Lord saved me and i believe everyone has that chance. The reason there so bad stuff in the world is because they don't open their hearts and let Jesus in like I did. trust me things get better when he is in your heart!

This really means a lot to me!

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  • Susan John Francis
    November 6, 2008
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    Amen!! to his name . When he is near there is no fear.lord is the only refuge we need .


  • Arkbear gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    I am blessed by your words.....you have shared some deepness from within your thoughts.....may you be walking through those Pearly Gates with me my Friend......God bless you!

     

     

    Bear ~

     

    When i fall back and stray away
    you tug at my heart telling me to stay
    You saved me and
    now  i am free!
    Lord for this i thank you with my heart
    and i pray that you will keep me from ever
    trying to part.


  • happy-lil-artemis
    October 24, 2008
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    WOW

    i love this your words just flow to the page like music flowes from a piano its very lovely


  • Three Doves
    October 23, 2008

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    Paise the Holy Name of our Lord Jesus! A wonderful testimony of Love you have for Jesus.
    Peace in light and love
    Noah


  • thefacadeoftheheart
    October 22, 2008
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    that was good i am glad to see you writing agian its been a while and it has been greatly missed


  • toomysterious
    October 21, 2008
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    This is a great testament.


  • paulcreates silver member
    October 19, 2008

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    Amen!

    What a wonderful witness this poem is. It reminds me of the scripture:
    Revelation 3:20
    "Behold, I stand at the door and knock. If anyone hears My voice and opens the door, I will come in to him and dine with him, and he with Me."
    God bless you!

    Paul

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