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America's Finest


One of America's finest
is laid to rest today
When he gets to heaven
I know what he will say
Just another soldier sir
I spent my time in below
I left my family crying
I know they miss me so
I tried to dodge the bullet
but I guess my time
had come
to join my fellow soldiers
when the day begun

Author notes

This poem is copyrighted and being published Internationally.

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  • Zixaphir
    October 19, 2008

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    Cool poem, very inspirational. Not too complicated, not too wordy, just a very nice piece. Nice job on getting published. ^^


    • Keeperofthestars
      November 9, 2008

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      Thank you

      For the applause and the comment on my poem. I really appreciate your input on my work! Have a Blessed day!