My boss is highly dandy
She treats me like her candy
Sometimes I get too randy
And find her fairly handy.
She calls me to her chamber
Induces and seduces
Then she unzips her trousers
And makes me drink her juices.
She loves my breasts and thighs
She bolts the door and sucks me
On spacious office table
She spreads my legs and fucks me.
An Open Invitation.....What do you think?
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*cough* ok yea that turned me on a lil bit
just the whole naughty doing it in the office...yea that hot hun 
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The rhyme and wording in this piece gives it a fun, cheeky air, though it doesn't cover up the hotness of the cavorting lol
Why are there never any cameras present when antics like this are going on?
Good write.
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Oh wow. The words of the poem go perfectly with the title.
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Great Rhyme in a highly Erotic Work piece.
Smoothly does it I love the last verse.
She loves my breasts and thighs
She bolts the door and sucks me
On spacious office table
She spreads my legs and fucks me.
Well even a man can dream a little cant I...x
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NooNiThEWitcH
Seems you're fond of having long things
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WICKED!!
MORE MORE!!
I really wish your poems were longer
* angel*
keep it up!
Nooni
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Ew!
I haven't had the time to read as of late. But... I see you haven't lost your ability to raise temps. A grand read for a -30 winter day in Maine. Thanks to your erotic writing.
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I see...
I see y u liked Three lol...and yeah they did lol
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Mmmm, so are business hours open? I'm not a lesbian by any means but ~ bloody hell ~ this made me kind of hot between the legs...maybe I'm traveling to the other side Oh goodness I wish I was your office lollipop.
~ Ink
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InkHeart
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Blaque07
I do like that but I like it with girls...sorry to disappoint you...lol
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just to let you know, you're my new best friend!
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I ~ I ~ am a lost for words ~ you make a woman
blush in many thoughts ~ i feel as if you had left the door unlocked/opened and i saw you having a real real good time! with a surprised smile on my face~ like Benny Hill the English comedian
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Verlecia
The door was intentinally kept open for you. Who stopped you from entering?
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i let my friend in school read this and they got a little happy
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nonsexynerd
Don't do it again, baby!
You might be penalized....
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Very erotic and sexy i wish my boss would do this to me.
P.S. I'm a boy.
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nonsexynerd
I offer myself to be a boss...at times...
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wow i have to say your are way amazing at writing. much more experienced than I. I like that last set
She loves my breasts and thighs
She bolts the door and sucks me
On spacious office table
She spreads my legs and fucks me.
I thought thats was pretty amazing. I could deffinately get a picture in my head.
And thank you for the comment on my poem
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very open in more ways than one sounds fun,
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ur a str8 forward discriptive writter havent met anyone that blunt with thier thoughts
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Raw, powerful
Very erotic and powerful but the form is distracting....definately makes me think how beautiful And makes me a bit jealous hehe
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Bloody OToole
Thank you. -
Leonura
Thanks...wanna try?
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oi, I'd say that is something worth making the reader drool over.
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can i join??? lol
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SEXIGONZALEZ
BY ALL MEANS, HONEY!
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my god i would love to be in this office lol
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cherrysmile
Ssssh!...Be careful!
Just knock softly and you'd be ENTERED into...
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I love thias, the imagery is spectacular, the flow is perfect. Just wow
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Angel1002
I love you, 'Haloween Party' girl!
You're a cutie!
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A limme- lick
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mcfreeman
Thanks...
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I thought the first two stanza's were the best. The last stanza is a little different, but I don't know how concerned you are about style... I think effect is what you're looking for. And for that, your style is very effective.
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jazzcat
I do it simply for pleasure...
Thank you, honey, for the valuable comment.
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i think that is one good boss, you got there, i like poem and not just cause i like anything girl on girl, ( i am a guy after all) but it simple and yet more, keep it flowing
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Disturbed Prodigy
You're the first one who appreciated the gooness of the boss...
She must be pleased to learn that.
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a wonderful scene you've created here! Definately hott!!
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soul survivor
Don't get closer...
The lava might burn you down...
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Excellent Poem
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Lisa Haslett
+ for an excellent lady
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i swear i love all yur poems they just make me laugh mannn
i spose they shudnt but
lmaooooo
and the rhyming just makes it even more brill
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You're such a sweet babe!
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Loved it! Again, mucho with the hottness! Makes me feel proud of taking part in same-sex sex reading this and seeing the response xx
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AraLapus
Make me proud too to be so intimate...skin to skin
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hot hot hot!!!!! im straight but this is still delicious and makes my mind wander down more "forbidden" paths. graphic, but still well done so it's not distaseful. the rhyme makes it all the more poignant and tasty to read. you are unashamed and that's something i really like too.
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Nymph-Angel
Beautiful comment...
beautiful as you yourself are....
with your aesthetic touch...
'Aesthetic kisses'
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jesus your so flirtatious its unreal ! lol graphic poem...but im a dude so how would i not like it lol
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Rhthm Child
Pleases me...
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WOWNESS...THIS IS WOW
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XSyNnFul-SyNnlex
Seems you don't mind joining....
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yummy
omy where can i submit my resume...... -
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yummy
You don't need to submit a resume...
You simply need to desire...
Welcome...any time...
The office remains open all night...
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Opportunities galore...!!
oh, how I adore your same-sex writings!!
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azureize
Only a person with lustful passion can adore that...
Thanks!
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lol very sexy highly erotic babe, good job
xoxo- christina
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christina-is-lost
Thanks for the ecouragement...
It'd motivate me to perform better better on the spacious table....
Sweeties like you're welcome to watch or join in unconditionally... -
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ur welcome~ id love to join in
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ah ha this was CLEVER.
the rhyme was great too.
I'd just suggest "On THE spacious office table"
with the in there.
anyhow great write. very hot.
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JustAnotherIdoit
You might be invited someday...
My boss is fond of variety....
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That's some company boss you have there! lol
Great work here with your rhyme and story.
Thanks a lot for sharing it here!
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Jeremy0826
Thank you very much...
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Sexy and penetrating as always luv. I'm on my knees waiting for you.
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VampireSeductress
Where Shall I start, honey?
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