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Unseen Light

Missing image



body blended
into woodwork,
dark of night

unable to feel
light of day



Author notes

Picture Credit: http://belle-a-dawna.deviantart.com/art/Come-With-Me-101116451

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 1, 2008

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    This is quite sad, imagine not being able to feel the light of day; very nicely penned

  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 1, 2008
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    Thank You for Your Entry


  • Nicolette gold member
    October 19, 2008

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    Great interpretation of the picture, Juls - one could feel and see this one.

    ~ Nicolette


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    October 19, 2008

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    YES!!

    This poem is GREAT!! Wishing all the best of luck to you with this perfect answer to the prompt, mate!! Take care!! Peace, Cyn


  • Mistressnomaster
    October 19, 2008

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    Hey Juls, Any mate of Fire is one of Mine....she said You were worth a read. Glad i dropped by.

    MM


    • fortyninereasons gold member
      October 19, 2008
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      Hey Macy, thanks for reading... I'll be by to have a read of you soon. How's NZ?
      Juls


  • Cannonsfire
    October 19, 2008
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    Nice one Juls C

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