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squat womb, stand barren land

shrivel show
of snow only
sand distance,

eyes down as knees~
to garden even
by dreams maneuvered
beyond louvres...
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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 19, 2008
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    Truly profound and deeply engaging... x


    • mbm
      October 20, 2008
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      Gypsy-Princess I sputtered at the picture to start with

      and then for me to speculate I could also illustrate a fundus per se that could be looked at by us...

      thank you so much for entwining all my reward with silver,
      call me Carolyn