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xXx...Just-Go-To-Hell...xXx

I just wanted you to know.

That your soul I have sold,

That your spirit I have broken,

That your mind I will unfold,

I will know every thought,

And devilishly use them against you,

For a dose of humiliation,

You are way overdue,

So I will give you that medication,

And watch your face turn bright,

You deserved that embarassment,

I knew I was right,

Now for my next trick,

I will give you pain,

Of the emotional kind,

You will surely go insane,

Now I will steal your will to live,

By breaking your heart,

Your family and friends I will murder,

I will tear them apart,

Next I will create physical pain,

By stabbing you with pins,

I will gouge out your eyeballs,

As the torture begins,

I will burn your possesions,

Unreplacable items too,

Everything will be gone,

Anything dear to you,

Soon you will die,

Cause you cant think anymore,

Blinded by despair and sorrow,

Your life is no more,

I am now happy,

You are dwelling in hell,

Forever suffering in fire,

I bid you farewell...

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  • Bean Sidhe silver member
    October 20, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry & best of luck!