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Golden Children

 

 

 

 

I slipped inside the cuticles of
the sun- danced like rivers shouting;
cracked the chords like candy canes
and traced the brittle peppermint like
rain inside tea kettles.

Burning hot with radiance, we sang-
fire in our hair; tongues wrapped
like bows in the locks of golden children,
whisper now they weep for days like
trust slipped in crystal cups...

His eyes, flush with colour beyond
deep horizons- buckle my knees and
I'll bend to your fervor; hands locked
tight around the collapsing fears that
incarcerate me

heartbeats race

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • broken-colours
    November 21, 2008
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    Incredible.
    Yes.


  • Leonura
    October 28, 2008
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    intriguing and moving. a very thought provoking write.


  • B Chandler
    October 27, 2008
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    Cricket


  • Learning2PaintYou
    October 20, 2008

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    I read the rules of this contest and I'm pretty sure you'll win! This poem is amazing. I can't get over how well you can write.

    "hands locked tight around the collapsing fears that incarcerate me" is my favorite line.

  • She Stole My Voice
    October 19, 2008

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    "cracked the chords like candy canes
    and traced the brittle peppermint like
    rain inside tea kettles."

    Fucking brilliant Charles.

    <33
    haha love you Carly.



    -Mary

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