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Fellowship

Aged wisdom
holds onto innocence. 


Wisdom marveling in
artless pleasure of child's
trust and faith.

Innocence,
adores wizened countenance.


Abandoning all reservation.
Confident in the certainty
of wisdom's protection.

Colorblind are they ,
without discriminating views.


Embracing the moment
of caring without stricture,

secure in simplistic truths. 

 

Society stalks its prey

 

 

 

Author notes

I looked at the pic.. and didn't even notice the difference in color..... I wish ALL mankind would adopt that view

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  • Tercarro
    October 21, 2008

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    I'm not sure

    I have read this a few times and I can't put my finger on what it is about it that I like or in fact, what I don't like. It certainly has my attention I'm sure of that which is good, don't ya think.
    Terry


  • Arkbear gold member
    October 20, 2008
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    I am always amazed at your work.......a tad heavy on the mets, but I still enjoyed it.........not a fan of repeating words......and wisdom is penned 3 X's.....however, it does give a tad more pOwer to the write.....thank you for coming out to support this contest.....God bless you!

     

     

     

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