Moons and suns witnessed
guilt metamorphism,
remorse cascading
in salty crystals,
final plea resounding.
In a list
A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture XIV by Manda Kathryn.
400 points, ended November 1, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nice write, full of vivid images.
Good luck with it.
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Thanks dear Judith
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I love the darkness and the depth in this
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Thank You for Your Entry
(there are 14 words here
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lol..one too many as they say..glad you enjoyed it..
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Amazing Haiku I so enjoyed reading this morning I have missed reading your wonderful writes. Good luck in the contest my friend I know you will do well. hugs Theresa
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Thanks a lot for your encouraging words dear Theresa
Firdous
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ooohh, yours is way better than mine, i likey alot
good luck and take care, hehe. Stephanie ♥
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Hmmm perhaps better then one of yours, but the other is better than this one...you keep guessing which is which....(that is what you will be doing after reading so many pronouns)lol
Thanks for your kind words...
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haha, what
i posted like 6 (so far)
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Thats the trick you keep figuring it out...Just to keep you busyas I am not going to give any poem away..I loved them all..some definitely better than mine...excellent creativity!
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evil hahaha
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