In part I played a tune today
In part the tune played me
A melody united us in moonlit harmony
The piano sang to its extent
Its keys unlocked no doors
My soul would dance without attempt, though spirits have no floors
I was the word, it was the rhyme;
To each of us our duty
Paired poets attuned to worlds of monumental beauty
A contest entry
- Moonlight Sonata by Mainzy.
400 points, ended October 24, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think of my poem?
Comments
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100th Hoodwinked~
Oh My~ Wonderful images You have brought forth also this tugs at Spirit- especially the words:
moonlit harmony~
Beautiful!!
Keep that quill dancing~
You have also been Hoodwinked by The Poetic Bandits~ I am a smidge late
Sowwy
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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100th Hood-Wink!
The first stanza of this is my favorite - I really like the way it flows so smoothly and has interesting imagery
- the rest followed well, although I would have preferred the last line of the second stanza be broken into two - the way it reads separates them, and the line is very long in comparison to the rest of the poem - but that is just me this is a beautiful poem!
Keep writing
Polly
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The length fits this piece perfectly. Beautifully written! Thanks for the entry and goodluck
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Wow, what a great piece!
Your rhyme & flow is superb.
I loved the last stanza. G'luck in the contest
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