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Black Sabeth

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she would leave
sable roses across his stomach...

her Sunday impression
of love...

 

 

 

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 1, 2008
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    The beauty in the sadness blends so flawlessly my heart sighs

  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 1, 2008
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    Thank You for Your Entry


  • luna-midnight gold member
    October 19, 2008

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    ooohhh, wow, lovely job here, i abs love it, especially sable roses
    good luck and take care
    Stephanie ♥


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    October 19, 2008
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    This is just a supreme write, you do these angsty love poems well. Best to you in the contest


  • Confusedboy
    October 19, 2008

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    well nicely done. any roses would be fine with me.

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