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La Tua Cantante

Oh, sing for me Beloved
Your unspoken rhymes weave treacherously through me
Your essence--too intoxicating to resist.

You are the one I seek,
What I thirst...flushed full in your cheeks.
A kiss on the brow
Your breath escapes your waiting lips
The melody of your heady scent breaks through.

Trembles quake through me
My lust for your symphony drives true.
Just one taste of your life giving music
My empty veins yearn for more...
Your crimson dew.

Sing, sing dear Muse
Your charm melts my defenses
Your sweet voice I cannot refuse
My tongue traces your pout, wanting something terrible.

Torn between my insatiable need and an unrelenting paramour
I clutch your body to mine
Ravenous for all that resides in your veins.

My lips on your neck
Suddenly so near
Hot beneath your skin
Your heavenly hymns chime so clear...

Dawn breaks, a gasp for air
Desperation in a sleepless dream
My delusion fades...you were never there.
I war with my head
The very desire burns my throat.
Though I try to speak evenly
The monster screams below...

Author notes

inspired by the Twilight series..just shortly after New Moon was written

critiques appreciated :]

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  • Sheli silver member
    October 19, 2008

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    BEWITCHING!

    you can feel the tormented passion bursting at the seams, sensuous and tragic, this leaves the reader wanting more


    • TragicEyes
      January 26
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      hehe wow thank you so very much ^_^; I am glad you liked it so