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Colorless Rose


Center of gravity unbalanced,
heart distorted in turmoil.
mind weary,
confusion devastates
shattered soul weeps into pools
of gray

Now fading to black………
as ink is silent
and colors were just shades
of yesterday~






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  • InBetweenThoughts
    October 25, 2008

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    …..and tomorrow became today,
    as the new sun rose above the horizon.
    New growth came with,
    and with glorious shades of red bloomed
    petals once again thrived,
    but full of life with new hope.
    As it once were, as it will be
    as forever and always
    I’ll love you……….
    Never again shall the roses fade xo xo Ken


  • moonbumps silver member
    October 24, 2008
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    'ink is silent.......' Gasp-beautiful-
    xxx Hilly


  • Confusedboy
    October 19, 2008

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    That place sounds familiar to me. A place I have been inside, lost trying to find way out. loved the flow, of color rose. That is deep and sweet.


  • Frozentearz
    October 19, 2008

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    Lots of feelings and thoughts fall out of this one
    sigh.. Leaves one to ponder within it.
    Thanks for sharing,
    Warm thoughts
    Frozentearz


  • Sandygram
    October 19, 2008

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    Beautiful and Sad

    I have felt this way so many times when I write. Your imagery is stunning as always dear friend. Hope you have a blessed day.Hugs and Smiles!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Love, Sandy

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