I planted her
[my tree]
whispering;
pull her here,
to hell with thee.
Author notes
Picture Credit: http://belle-a-dawna.deviantart.com/art/Come-With-Me-101116451
13words
A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture XIV by Manda Kathryn.
400 points, ended November 1, 2008, 32 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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The use of bold and italics really gives emphasis to the meaning you are writing; excellently penned
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Thank You for Your Entry
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dang
luna, you are getting better and better. this was amazing. so short, yet so beautifully penned.
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Ahhh..one word. Amazing. You my friend write awesome poetry.
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grrrrr....
atta girl, vent
Mum, xx
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Well, well, well
Vent your anger my friend
whatever it is just let it out,
and i like how you kept it a mystery,
Very nicely done
Good luck in the contest
Ken
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I don't know what else to say but WOW!
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OO! dark, full of anger venting...Good angle
All the best again!
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Closely kept mystery, your write and the image are in synch.
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