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Midnight Lullaby

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She calls the sky
prey till marrow
until then
he lives in sorrow.

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Picture Credit: http://belle-a-dawna.deviantart.com/art/Come-With-Me-101116451

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 1, 2008

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    I love that you rhymed in just 13 words; I am envious of that talent
    I also like the Shakespeare feeling given with use of 'till marrow'


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 1, 2008
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    Thank You for Your Entry


  • echo-ink
    October 19, 2008
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    OH!

    [shakes head with worry]


  • chilali
    October 19, 2008
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    Okay! I really like this one here! Nicely done. Good luck!


  • crimsondew
    October 18, 2008
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    I see you like this picture a lot!!
    Well done again!
    Good luck!


  • written-in-ink
    October 18, 2008
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    very nice

    i like it

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