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Keeping the Moon Company

Tap dancing over
fragments of skeletons,
show stopping performances
celebrating the Moon's freedom.

Author notes

Hey the moon needs company to.
Credit for the Picture:
http://belle-a-dawna.deviantart.com/art/Come-With-Me-101116451

A contest entry

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 1, 2008

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    How unique to think of tap dancing over skeletons; the celebration of moons freedom is indeed worth a dance


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 1, 2008
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    Thank You for Your Entry


  • Asylaarix
    October 19, 2008

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    WOW!
    13 words!
    AMAZING
    and
    STUNNING!
    You left me
    BREATHLESS!
    I love every
    WORD!

    Good luck to you my friend
    Much Luv & Respect!
    TT


    • badnovocaine
      October 19, 2008
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      ahhhh the computers freezing!!!
      Wow it takes ten minutes for me to write a simple thank you back.
      Anyways thanks I hope my computer starts to unfreeze itself soon.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    this is beautiful
    nicely done and good luck in the contest
    take care, Stephanie ♥

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