His grip taught me to bend
while Hell rushed blood;
letting me fall.
Author notes
Picture Credit: http://belle-a-dawna.deviantart.com/art/Come-With-Me-101116451
13words
A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture XIV by Manda Kathryn.
400 points, ended November 1, 2008, 32 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congrats on gold dear !yaya!
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I like how you captivated me with her bending due to his grip; and then the boldness of letting me fall locks in the darkness well
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Thank You for Your Entry
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
jeese
Mum, xx
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i will catch ya
gd luck 2 ya babes
cheers 4 now abe
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you are going to cathc me?
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Well that one also hurt
Such rawness in this poem
Best wishes to you hun
Julie
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13 words were obviously enough for you my friend
you were able to capture brillinace
just within a few short words.
beautifully portrayed!
Good luck to you my dear.
Much Luv & Respect!
TT
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Such great imagery you have portrayed here hon! Well done! GREAT work with this one as well. Good luck
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Good imagery and I see quite a depth beyond the image you portray here..Excellent work!
All the best!
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