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I'm sick
Of your
Shitty little lies

It's
No longer
Just your fake disguise

Now
You're starting to
Believe them

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  • Spunky Splinter
    October 20, 2008
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    its nice. I think you could of come up with a title for this one (i know you said you had troubles with titles and all, lol!) I like this... very sad/emotional/cute/sad (wait, I said that already) Congrats on the bronze (yey! We both won!!!) Well, good write!
    Sydney


  • thesefadingstars.
    October 18, 2008
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    nice. I like it. good write