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Places Of The Heart

Missing image

Crisp leaves under feet gives way

From sound to distracting sight

One would think she saw day

When all around it had been night!

 

Shiny scene on water rare

Like silver globe in sphere aglow

Shades of fall are everywhere

A place like heaven here I know.

 

Natures colors bronze and gold

Coppered green, burnt umber alluring

Sighs of wonder, her breath unfolds

Snap now captured in her lens unfurling

 

Cerelean skies reflected below

In ripples where brook trout leap

Treasures of my heart kept here I know

Our secret hideaway, it's ours to keep!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

A silver globe that is in some gardens reflecting images of the beauty is here in ones mind as one sees this beautiful photo....

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  • penman gold member
    February 10
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    Excellent

    Another amazing write. So very well done. Thank you for sharing.


  • heismysong
    November 5, 2008
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    Good Imagery

    I liked some of the descriptions you used- very nice.

    Thank you for entering!