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I get up early
to the sign in i go
then off to the shower
with a hug on the go

its time for the meeting
Rev. Ryan's a blast
he gets you fired up
gets you off of your ass

then here comes mark
we clap for a bit
we open some eggs
in the room we all sit

he calls off the cars
one at a time
he gives you encouragement
to do your job right this time

off to the breakfast
is it a gas station or a restaurant
did you write your business yesterday
or did you not

now out to the T 
energy drinks you inhale
your cheery and talking
and writ-in up sales

the days about over
its come to a stop
now here goes my question
are you a winner or wab?

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  • LordMaccie
    October 25, 2008

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    it rhymes :-D hahaha go you!

    ill leave more critique when i can read, i got a little drunk last night.... cant see properly :-P


  • Demented Crow
    October 18, 2008
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    muahahahaha