as I kneel- a silk leaf,
in a river of desire
I feel you--
the yellow moon,
with ribbons of light;
peel me naked,
among silent stars
and as a pattern of
sultry thoughts, become-
layered upon ripples
in cadence…
to your distant shore
I shimmer to golden promises,
in colors, of… a familiar song
and somewhere in-between,
in shadows of night
…I rise in the mist
and find, a bit of soft green,
under my feet
to dance with you;
…with love filled eyes
Author notes
inspired by a title prompt
A contest entry
- Mm'kay. It's Free-verse Time :] by Sunkissed xo.
400 points, ended February 19, 68 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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senses to a love poem, this is it, lovely one Mal...
very nice to see short very clearly visioned poetry on here, thank you for sharing
good luck
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simply perfect
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purdy
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How beautiful!
You certainly ensnared my senses with this gorgeous imagery.
Very romantic and vivid.
Thanks for entering my contest. Best of luck
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Well, my special friend, you are quite the romantic. I would like to say more about your ruminations, but I shall stick to your poetry!
Imagery makes me want to jump through the computer and meet this melter of hearts. Shy is just a word. I would settle for you reading the words that you cannot speak. Not afraid to embarrass, I review your romantic verse through loving eyes, and challenge you to keep penning these romances.
XOXO
LInda
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beautifully snesual...divinely touching. What a write, poet, what a write!
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thanks carol...lol, you're the only one to have read this... it's in a contest two months old... i hope passions is ok?
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Thank you I will see.
Your Title: Shadows Dancing in the Moonlight
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