I felt him there
I looked into his eyes
he wanted me..
I wanted him
He slid his hand over my cheek
awakening the heat deep inside
a pink tone appeared on my face
and he smiled
I raised my hand to his cheek
and ran my fingers through his hair
and down the back of his neck
pulling him closer
Our lips just inches away
I feel your breath quicken
you want to kiss me
but not just yet
It seems like hours pass
night to day
day to night
I have your gaze
And finally I smile and bring you in
we meet
and we share this long awaited kiss
its warm and you only make it warmer by trying to loosen my bra
I pull away and say
"good try"
and walk away
biting my lip
looking coy I look over my shoulder
waiting for you to follow
Author notes
thats how I'd like to be kissed ^_^
Inspired by a song
10/18/08
WarmHeartedGeisha
A contest entry
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Comments
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nice, very vivid.
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Wow, that is very vivid. The flow and rhythm is consistent, and I think the structure is perfect. The symbolism there of your emotions made it more than just descriptive. Nicely done.
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ha ha i like the intensity you brought to this. nice job!
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awesome poem!!!!!!! I believe that is how every woman wants to be kissed!!!!
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i think that is how everyone wants to be kissed, well most girls i know. the poem was like a first kiss done all over again, keep it flowing i liked it.
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I love that last bit. How you expect him to follow. I think I love it so much because a lot of woman think that way, though I don't always recognize it.
Nice imagery and use of sense of feeling. It's nice to see literature with other sense other than primary ones we normally think about, such as sight.
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lol thank u
~Lorissa~
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How steamy and romantic!
I love the imagery in this one.
Lovely work my dear and I hope that
this dream of yours becomes reality
for you very soon. Good luck to you!
Jeremy0826
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Thanks ^_^
~Lorissa~
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