Their meeting was all but pure-
(for you see life always comes to quick)
And swiftly fell of animated wonder...
Blissfully bittersweet candle light beckons-
(for it licks at the cracks in the frame)
Forwardly into rage of no longer past transgressions.
And there stood all for the closed to see-
(and then they fell, and then they saw)
That secret sin kept hidden drown out right...
Long has the time been since a smile-
(of simple silence, and gracious intent)
Has gained a fragment of meaning across his face.
The beast no longer can be contained-
(like the pages of the memory you abhor)
Yet the freezer shall forever lock it inside...
Once more you say to me, of drowning embrace-
(as well the contents of thy venom kiss)
Hath sting me once more, no more...
I miss you. Yet you haven't ever left-
(You're so far away, of omnious mist)
You play hard with the one that lingers...
In your mind, and with me you obliviously-
(and so forth can't pray thee tell good fortune)
Toss me around, like a wave, although I'll never...
Fade with the tide, only sway back an' forth,
Back an' forth, until love takes me hold, binds us,
Or takes me prisoner and lets me die, forever more...
Author notes
you know what, i was upset and angry when i wrote this. thats all you need to know. i wrote it about a week ago from today. but anyway... like it, love it, hate it. either way, comments are appreciated, and as always, interpret the poem as you see it, cause i'm not gonna give something that can have multiple meanings one set one.
comments? concerns?
Comments
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like the old english style.. and the closing stanzas...amazing
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You haven't told me anything, nothing, nada, in IM's
you know you worry me sometimes. You know i'm always here for you and you can tell me anything. I will never judge but take you into a warm embrace, i will never shun, just pull you closer, i will never let you go but hold on tighter because you are someone who understands me and is a great friend. So promise you'll tell me whats going on? i haven't heard from you in two months i'm dying to know how you are......i'm IMing you my email so if thats more conveniant then please email me how are you? I've missed you a lot my bffl. 
btw you're poem was brilliant and the emotions were intense, flawless to say the least, i think it is perfect.
~Silky
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