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Paper weight.

Carve my initials on the same bench we sat on
we sat on, the first time you asked me (out)
when I tilted my head, blushed to myself and almost passed (out)

Just hold my hand; it will fit perfectly
You add to my convalescent recovery.
Literally.  I wish you could see.

I'm not sure you really know what I mean.
Our vivid verision.  Our vivid visions.
Erase my extreme fatigue. 
My heart is yours.

Subtract everything from this pointless scene
Just stay with me, stay with me while I hesitate.
And let me feel.

I wrote you these letters.
My heart converting onto the paper
Hold me and I'll be so much more safer.

My heart is yours.


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I finally wrote something with meaning
This is for you.

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  • forevermyangel14
    October 18, 2008

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    aww thank you it's so pretty..and you use the words perfectly. everything is perfect
    just like you
    <3