Ethereal seraph she may pretend
Yet by mortality condemned
Leaving the broken body
To carry the weight of day
Practice my handwriting on my skin
So I can be a perfect grownup someday
This is just another note I’ll never send
Love your best friend
Color is lost on me
For that elegantly named adjective deceives
Cold red roses once so warm
Stand as solitary as you
Hate the plastic faces
But they’re broken too
I can’t say goodbye
Because to me she will never die
So how do you say no
When you see yourself in a stranger
That just keeps falling down
Scarred they’re gonna drown
Die with no stupid glory
Because she needs to be beautiful
To prove to him she is
Words written mean more than those spoken
Lies on paper just keep shattering
My long sleeves in summer
As out of place as me not alone
A contest entry
- Your Best Lines by Danna Hobart.
390 points, ended October 19, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Leaving the broken body
To carry the weight of day
These lines I find very interesting.
Practice my handwriting on my skin
This is a very good image.
Because she needs to be beautiful
To prove to him she is
So many women fall into this.
Thanks for entering.

