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dance with shamans, thunder-boys clap



he licked my soul
burrowed into vein,
intricate circuits of
poetry and blood


in-sin-you-us leather,
slithers into dreams

whispers love
i pant and scream


he walked through the door,
offered a hand, we
dance with shamans,
thunder-boys clap

the drumbeat slows

incantations bubble
with magic rising,
the great rite of word and music
manifested  in song

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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