take advantage of me
stare as my lips start to bleed
these words are killing me
they ooze out of my mouth
letting my emotions run loose
but the things i do to myself
the thoughts i think
are worse than what you can do...
i slip further away with every word that slides out
reality slaps me in the face
bruises leave me broken
insides torn out
laying on a broken floor
tears bleed out of my lifeless eyes
A contest entry
- rawr I want good love poetry!!!! by Live with a passion.
600 points, ended November 15, 2008, 79 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Sincerely, what do you think?
Comments
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u leave me with an image in my iris
scarrrry
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tears bleed out of your lifeless eyes.....
scary!!!
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