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[ take advantage of me ]

take advantage of me
stare as my lips start to bleed
these words are killing me
they ooze out of my mouth
letting my emotions run loose

but the things i do to myself
the thoughts i think
are worse than what you can do...

i slip further away with every word that slides out

reality slaps me in the face
bruises leave me broken
insides torn out
laying on a broken floor
tears bleed out of my lifeless eyes

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  • Marcus.
    October 19, 2008
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    u leave me with an image in my iris
    scarrrry


  • JoleneMarie
    October 19, 2008
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    tears bleed out of your lifeless eyes.....

    scary!!!