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Simmering In The Dark

An instance of time has just passed me bye
A lost moment for your sadistic mind
You have left a burning candle to simmer to its death
Leaving my soul to finally rest

How could you torment and starve a lonely heart
Stealing my beauty and drowning my ark
Filling my soul with a distant hope
Crashing my ship as I try to stay afloat

A silence born as the plank grows ever nearer
My tragedy of life now looking far clearer
A whistling breeze coming across my face
I have seen life's beauty and now your sadistic ways

My darkness in thought has filled my heart
You leave me lost and drowning, I will fall in the dark


 

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  • XxXEmoXor
    January 12, 2009
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    i think i know how you feel but nobody ever knows how another person feels


  • xxxdeathgodxxx
    November 15, 2008
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    wow powerful, nicely written