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Buffed Hoofs

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Poor racehorse Silky Dreams

whose owner changed trainers

just last week.

 

Thought he could improve his results

by hiring an expert on fitness

to whip those lazy behinds

into perfect shape.

 

Fixing a treadmill to fit a horse

was different and did work better

than the bicycle idea,

but his idea of creating aerobics

based on watching Mr. Ed reruns

really didn’t inspire much reaction.

 

So now comes the really desperate time

this gym guru getting really tough

just not getting anything, except snickers

from hands on the ranch

watching him try to tighten up sagging stomachs

with his equestrian sit up routine.

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  • AnnD Moderators member
    November 3, 2008
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    ha ha ha..... oh what a clever take on the image. I cannot imagine animals doing pressups, sit ups etc in a gym. lol. I had to laugh reading this as the imagnation went alog with your story. Thankyou and your muse for creating this wonderful little smilemaker.


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    October 22, 2008

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    I think he worked out too much his insides have gone to glue. very cleaver story well done

    Cyber (Paul)


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    laughing...now that would "some" sight at the gym....
    a horse doing yoga....exercises!
    loved your poem, well done, it was a true and fun
    pleasure to read!
    ears/Seattle


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    This is a great take on your chosen pic prompt I enjoyed the read and wish you well in this contest