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Shattered Life

Shattered alive
I sit here now
Wishing to be whole again
Shattered Alive
By your touch
By words I can't describe
Shattered Alive
Because of you
Saying I'll survive
Shattered Alive
I'm just bits and pieces
But I'm begging to be whole again
Shattered Alive
This is me
Left to die
Shattered Alive
I'm broken
Cut down by each word you've said
Shattered Alive
I'm begging please
Someone find the pieces
Shattered Alive
Don't know what to do.
Solid mirrors
Show a shattered life
A shattered me
Shattered alive

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  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    I hope that you can pick up the pieces and be happy. Another sad one Kalyn...take care

  • berekah
    October 26, 2008
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    I like


  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 25, 2008

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    Very sad and emotional. Well done. Thanks so much for entering my contest. I’m honored to have you show your work here.


  • xFallenxAngel
    October 18, 2008
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    Thi is good

    It is so true on things that happen