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Resolution

 

Trap door
  touching me with your tenderness

I can't fight chemistry
& the smell on the back of mind

you break down,
shake down, quiver, tremble, quake...


Ssh don't make a sound.

Just stay with me
& stare to the morning sun.


Stardust & heavenly bodies
[falling like confetti around our feet]
celebrating the sound as you whisper in my ear...

It makes it all so clear

[resolution]


Don't want to hold you down
I only want to live this
falling away,
                  falling away,
one more step back as I fall into you.

Author notes

No I haven't met anyone. I'm just not opposed to it or the places they takes me.
I have no idea what this came out of.

Just be honest. If you don't get it, it wasn't for you.

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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 7
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    Wow. This is stunning. I loved the change in fonts and the flowing layout. Beautiful.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • PerfectImperfection
    November 16, 2008

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    Always good to have a hopeful meltdown, a longing for something you cannot quite pinpoint. Dreamlike, and thoughtful throughout. Those small moments are beautiful to revel upon, if only for a while. Nice write!


  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    Ive been reading your work, i feel ridiculous commenting on all of them, so i continue reading instead. lol... but i love it...awesome beyond words....