(This is ridiculous i can't possibly compare to such a good song but oh well, i'll try)
She listens to the song,
In the seats far above.
Hearing the voice,
Of an accomplished woman.
That woman can sing,
She's fulfilled her dreams,
But the girl watching,
She doesn't even know.
The girl watching listens to the song,
By a girl with more confidence than she,
And the words of inspiration,
meet her in her own beating heart.
The girl is raised,
As high as the stands,
She realizes her dreams,
Can be fulfilled in her plans.
The simple song of fiction,
Can be more than an act,
It changes the girls life,
It changes how she lives.
A contest entry
- Wicked by Georgia La Mariposa.
550 points, ended October 27, 2008, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I like this don't put yourself down I thought it was good
(if not many people enter I may have to close so don't be upset if I remove it's because I don't have enough entries to judge 
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