I'd love you even if you were a million little pieces all scattered across the sky
because the sky would see me
and I would see you in each little piece
each a piece of you
your kindness
your heart
to make what has
and always will be who you are
the bigger picture
that which I can't help or ignore,
just love
Author notes
1b. Love
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I just realized after this poem that I posted 2 of my prewrites. I write about a rather broad spectrum of topics, so I would appreciate it if you looked off my page to see what I mean. 
I'll be deleting one of them soon.
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Comments
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Being one with the stars, I like that idea, tying up nicely "love" making two , one. Different.
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excellent. this is NOT what I would have expected from a poem in the spectrum of love though it more than fits. the first line i think you missed a spot where it should have been brought down its a tad long in comparison with the rest. other than that i thought this was a nice "cute" little poem that really has some deep meaning. i kind of took the idea of one becoming the stars not sure if that was your view but either way its good
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