I'm ashamed of my past
And scared of what my future may hold
Maybe my life is unsurpassed
And my bad luck already foretold
I don't want to be like the clock
Ticking with the usual pattern inside
Forget the key, lets break the lock
Follow the wind and find my pride
I'm sick of being trapped in every direction
It's time to go find that spec of light
Where I can feel that spark of affection
And actually believe everything will be alright
I want to feel the wind blow through my hair
I want to take some risks and feel the rush
To climb the highest mountain and take in the fresh air
To laugh til I cry and let others see me blush
I've loosened up and jumped out of a plane
Danced and even did a little stripping
But I'm not done with this glass of campaign
So I ask you, Wanna go skinny dipping??
Suggestions are welcome!
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another ,,,,
inside look at you..And this is why i say Inside you their is an amazing person and Dont chnge you for anyone ....Your Past is what it is ..The past..A new Begining is what it is ..A new Begining..Remember i will steal a line from someone esle.."Stay Golden Mindie...stay Golden"
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Very nice work hun. I know from knowing you and reading past works that your past is something you would like to be as far away from as possible! You can do it! You will reach that dream and find the light you are looking for! I am hoping for the very best for you in that everything is going to work out as you would hope and dream! I love you Hun! And yes I want to go skinny dipping with you! *L*
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awesome
lol wow this is pretty sweet lol and i love than rocking baby jaiden poem
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hey chicky whats up? nice write...
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It is normal to regret the past, feel pain from it or even hold on to it, either to greater or lesser degree, but the problem arises if you cant let go, it is something you do not want to endure or get caught up in, because it can be hard to get out of it.
However, there is hints at strong hope and a sense of playfulness at the end of this piece, which is a good thing. Well expressed.
Good write.
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