Dreaming child of thy deep
Pretendeth not to fear
Though horrid nightmare soon awaits
Thy sleeping childish ear
Taketh up thy wing of fate
And curleth upon sea
For looking out ‘pon vast dry land
Without a soul to be
Crouch below the surface
Where none can see thy day
Walketh upon shadows dark
Where shadows dare not stray
Blink about the arid sea
Of bleak unending lie
Keeping hope upon thy word
That hope shall never die
Author notes
Written January 27th, 2004
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Wow!!Thats really good...so creative...and written brillantly....its really beathtaking and got beautiful imagery...especialy those 2 parts:
"Crouch below the surface
Where none can see thy day
Walketh upon shadows dark
Where shadows dare not stray
Blink about the arid sea
Of bleak unending lie
Keeping hope upon thy word
That hope shall never die"
Wael
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that was really good! Although I wasn't sure what it was about...this is one of the poems that you have to stop and really analyze, and right now im so tired i would just make a mess of it! lol but it was really good!
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