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No Fucking Boundaries, No Fucking Respect

I've had enough of this crap !

Always someone with something to say

 

         But my heart is in pain

 

Everybody thinks they know better

Everybody's a fucking master mind !

 

 

               Can't you see how you hurt me

 

Who the hell died and made them God ?

 

 

               I have never done anything to you

 

Nasty Fucking bastards !

       

                  I feel sorry for your failings as a human being

 

 

I can't stand it when people are so

disprespectful and rude !

 

 

 

               Manners cost nothing and are so valuable

 

A poetry site is no place

for such bullshit 

What I load of crap you have pulled

 

 

 

                     We're all here to write poetry

                      to share the love

                     and grow as poets

 

 

So WHY THE HELL STUFF THAT UP?

 

I've had it big time !

I'm out of here !

 

 

 

                 Am  I'm really out of here ?

 

 

 

FUCK YES !!!!

 

 

 

                     For now

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Ranting lets out all the anger. I hope this helps.
(Expressing the inner thoughts and the outer thoughts)

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 21, 2008
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    Excellent! Damn have we not all felt this at least a few time on here...some are so GOD like that they know it all...do we forget kindness and manners and that cruelity hurts...wither we show it or not...your words are strong and brillant and hit home for many I am sure...well done!
    Best,
    mystic

  • The Rainbows Mind
    October 18, 2008

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    Holly shit, wow, this was fuckin bngry? Meow, hahaha, sorry, just trying to lighten the mood.
    If this is as truthful as you claim, I hope you wouldn't be foolish enough to let a few disrespectful low life losers hold the weight in your decision to stay or go. It's getting through the hard times that make all the difference. I'm not telling you anything that you don't already know.
    Being as musically centered as I am, I feel obligated to say, this kind of reminds me of some lyrics to a song called Mr. Vanity by hard rock industrial band Chaotica. Yes, love hard rock. I'll admit, I can lose my temper and remember all the disrespectful scumbags that roam this planet. It irks me that they could go on, so blissful in their ignorance, and yet they still manage to survive. It's hard because you have no choice but to on occasions become intertwined with such shallow minded beasts.
    It is not a peaceful world that we live in and our ability to attain peace is limited. It makes you hope and prey, that there really is something better in the end, regardless of what or whom you believe.

  • piggyback
    October 18, 2008

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    I like the outer/inner aspect of this. It's very revealing and true for more people than we'd think. Love how this sounds like a translation. If only more people understood this, I think this world would be a better place.


  • Super-man
    October 18, 2008
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    WOW

    Awesome

    I could hear it as I read.

    All the best fot the contest.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    BRAVO. WOnderfully penned and the rant, almost as if I said it.
    You did well.
    Best wishes in the contest


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