Baby,
I gave you everything;
Physically, mentally, emtionally.
How could it be that on the same day i lose
The very thing that keeps me fresh,
The thing i swore no one could ever abuse,
I also lose my life, discard my flesh,
Hell, it isn't taken from me,
It's given.
It was always going to be just yours see,
I give you everything that i need for livin',
The skin you touched, my air you breathed back then,
Have it.
Take it.
I don't need it now, or ever again.
This is for you,
Not because of what has past,
There's a difference that we knew.
My life was destined to not become vast,
You gave me so much, and i took it,
It made butterflies explode below.
It still does i admit.
It doesn't for you and i no that however,
If you don't love me-im gone.
I'll love you forever,
Just realise.
It was only ever you.
A contest entry
- Missing Me, Missing You by ms-cuddles.
900 points, ended October 21, 2008, 45 entries
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i actually remember the events in my life that i went through that this poem expresses.. giving ur heart and soul and body all for one person...Physically, mentally, emtionally.. and they just give it away with out knowing what it was for u to give so much.. and even after they break ur heart and crush everything u still can help but love them anyway... that was excatlly how it happened with my first love..
i loved ur poem it was really great
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This is so sad. To give your all and have it taken then thrown away, knowing that you'll love always no matter what. Pure heartbreak. Thank you for entering and good luck. Hugs~ Cuddles
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very depressing. I like your words. It's like your actually talking to me and telling me about it.
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hot
the emotions flown from your lines are very hot its touching ...
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This is seriously sad, and many reading this will read much of the devotion you have. this is a right tear jerker. T
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